St Barbara’s Primary School
Rain-brain, owl-howl, hop-hope
One day there was a lot of rain it came down so hard it hurt my brain. I ran to the shops to get a hat but on my way I heard a howl. When I looked round I saw an owl. As I opened the gate I got a fright so I tried to hop away as quick as I could. I hope I make it. When I got inside I ate an apple and after I finished my mum said I could go. When I went back out I could see the man in the moon waving down at me.
Aidan- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
pain –Spain, nail-snail, each-beach, lip-slip and air- hair
On my summer holiday I went on a train to Spain. On the way to Spain I saw a snail. I picked the snail up but it just slipped right out of my hand. I tried to put it on my nail but it just stuck like glue to my finger. I put my finger out the window to get some air but it fell off my finger and scraped some of my skin off with it. I was in so much pain. I jumped out the window and I landed on the beach. My hair blew in the wind, each strand sticking to my lip. I hoped I would make it to my hotel safely.
By Cassiah P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
heat-cheat, lip-flip, hip-ship, air-hair and eat-heat
Today the air is foggy in my so I am going to wash my hair. My lip is burning because the heat is higher than usual. I am alone and bored so I’m going to flip my water bottle but the last time I did it I accidently hit my mum on the ear with it. I’m going to school tomorrow and I hope that nobody in the class is going to cheat by looking at my work. I was day dreaming and turned and hit my hip off the table. Now I am on my way back but my hip still aches.
By Dylan- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
nail-snail, ice-mice, cream-scream, air-hair and it-bit
One day in my room I was playing with my friend then suddenly I fell because I saw some mice so I had to get some ice on my head. Then I went out to play because my friend went out. When I got out my friend had a snail in his hand. Then I said I could scream so I ran into my house to have some cream. I tried to open the bottle of cream and cut my nail. My mum said we have to go to the hair dressers. Then when I got home I stayed in for an hour. My mum said go get air in your lungs. So I went to the park but I got bit by a dog and it really hurt.
By Emilia- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
cream –scream, a –at, each–teach, lip-clip and ice-mice
One day I went to a restaurant called TGI Fridays. For my pudding I had cream and marshmallows. When I got home there were mice all over my house, one was at the fridge and one was at the computer. The girl mouse had lipstick on and a hair clip in. I screamed but I had some cream left over so I spread the cream on the mice. It was so cold they turned to ice. They looked like statues. I was so cold my hand couldn’t even move and my mum was hugging me so tight I couldn’t breathe.
By Finn- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
Owl-howl, rain-train, pot-spot, cream-scream and lip-slip
One day I went on a train and heard an owl howl it was a bit scary but I didn’t mind. I could hear the rain battering off the window. I wanted to scream and it nearly cracked the window. I had to move but I couldn’t it felt like I was frozen on the spot. I was really scared, I didn’t know what to do so my dad and I hugged each other. I was the brave one so I jumped out and ran and ran but we had forgotten the way home. As I was running I slipped on a broken pot and bit my lip. What a horrible journey!
By Fraser – P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
Own-town, team-steam, eat-meat, right-bright and heat-cheat
One nice day in my own town there was a giant steam of hotness and light. A piece of meat was burning up and I wanted to eat it but then a football team came and ate the meat all up. They were so hot that steam came out of their mouths and they had to find some water to cool them down. There was no water and a right, bright light shone on them and they fell down because of the heat! I then saw a small piece of meat and ate it. I was happy because it was yummy!
By Giovanni - P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
hot-shot, pain-Spain, lip-slip, ice-mice, each-peach
One day I was hungry so I thought I am going to the shop across the road for something to eat. I saw a peach so I bought one peach for each of my family. My peach was very juicy, it was delicious. I got a slip to make sure I had paid for it. The peach refreshed my mouth and lips. It started to rain so I got a flight to Spain. After the flight my ear was in right pain. It was hot when I got to the hotel. There was a football pitch and I took a shot into my Dad, “Woohoo I scored a goal!” I shouted at the top of my voice. I got into my room, it was as cold as ice. To make things worse I saw a group of mice, I got a fright. I ran out and I left Spain and came home to Scotland. It was still raining but at least there was nice mice.
By Harris- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
owl-howl, all-mall, ill-bill, at-mat, nail-snail
One day I got to go to the park and I heard owls howl so loud it almost broke my ears. Then I saw a snail, he looked very nice so I called him Bill. We had a fun time we had ice cream, it was delicious! We got two one for him and one for me. Then we went on a bus to a gigantic shopping centre there were shops and lots of toys and colouring sets, school stuff and mats. We went into Toys r Us, Smyths and Hobby Craft. The shopping centre reminded me of an American mall, it was the best place ever. After that I took Bill home.
Jayden- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
in-bin, hip-chip, fair-fairy, it-sit and eat-seat
One day I went to town and got chips from the chip shop. I started to eat my chips then I finished then and put them in the bin. Then I went home and went to sit down. My mum asked where I was and I told her I had been in the town. My mum took a seat and said tell me more. I told my mum what I did. She wasn’t happy because I went to the chip shop when she had just made us dinner. It was not fair but then my tooth came out. But when I checked it had disappeared. I went straight back to sleep. I woke up and my hip was sore so I went to the doctor.
Jessica- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
Cream-scream, it-sit, ox-fox, heat-cheat and hare-share
One day in the woods there was three little pugs. They went to the shop to get some cream. As they walked home they all had some cream because it is nice to share. It was a long walk back in the heat and as they were walking through the fields they saw some animals. They saw a fox, a hare and an ox. One of the pugs started to scream “FOX FOX.” The fox saw them and started to chase them home. When they were back home they had to sit down to get their breath back. After they got their breath back they played hide and seek but the oldest little pug peaked. He was a cheat.
By Lennon – P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
ill-kill, ice-mice, ark-park, pain-paint and each-teach
One day I went to play paint ball. I was in pain when I got shot. I then felt ill so I went home. The next morning I woke up and I saw some mice they had been frozen in the ice. I painted a picture of an ark and when I was finished I went to the park. I met someone from Spain so I had to teach them English. I also saw two people there trying to kill each other. I saw lots and lots of animals on the in a cage. One of the animals escaped. Then I saw Donald Trump with a dog called Dog Trump and a cat called Cat trump.
By Liam – P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
right –bright, ox-fox, ice-rice, pain-Spain and lip –slip
The first time I went to school, there was a very hard sum. I put my hand up and I got it right. The teacher said I was a bright cookie. When I went home I had an ice cream. I had rice for my dinner and after my dinner I went out. I saw an ox and a fox. They were playing football. I felt scared so I ran away but I slipped and hurt my lip. When we moved to Spain, a boy bullied me in school. He tripped me up, I was in a lot of pain. After this my mum and I decided to go back home to Scotland.
By Matthew – P4
St Barbra’s Primary School
train-rain, snail-nail, ice-mice and cream-scream
One day I went to the train to my grans in Englan. I had a teddy called Winnie and it was holding an ice cream. When I got to my grans house I went to my room and then I saw two mice creep out of a hole in the wall. I was so scared that I went outside to escape but there was too much rain and ice so I went back in. Then I saw a stable with houses in it, I wanted to go and see them but I was not allowed. Then I saw a snail on the window and I got such a fright that I knocked the coffee off the table and my nail got caught and broke off. I had had enough of my grans house so I went home the next day.
By Mia- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
ice-mice, table-stable, nail-snail, cream-scream and ill-bill
One day I saw some ill mice. They were ill because they stepped on a poisonous nail and tripped over a bad snail. Then I heard a scream, it was coming from the old table inside the stable. When I went over I saw that it was the farmer, he was crying because he didn’t have enough money to pay his two thousand pound bill. I gave him my two thousand pounds so he could pay for the bill. Then we helped the mice get better by giving them some ice to put on their sore paws.
By Michael- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
pain-Spain, each-beach, nail-snail, team-steam and rain-train
One day I went to Spain on a train. I was so happy to get away because all of the rain in Scotland. When I was on the train I could smell all the horrible steam. The first thing I did when I got there was to go and swim at the beach. When I was playing in the sand my nail got caught and I was in so much pain. I could feel all the blood on my nail. The blood felt like snail slime. Each step I took was sore and I hoped it wouldn’t affect my dancing career. I love being part of my cheerleading team.
By Millie – P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
table-stable, nail-snail, each-peach, pain-Spain and ice-mice
One day in Spain I saw some mice under the table and then I saw a big snail. I was so terrified that there was mice and snails right below me. Then I went to a stable and saw a giant peach. I accidently stepped on a nail. I then slipped and hurt myself again. My foot and knee were sore and I had to put ice on each of them. I was crying for at least 1 hour. I was so sad and mad that I kept getting hurt. I called my mum she was very mad. I accidently smashed my iPhone 7. I had a disastrous day!
Niamh - P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
table-stable, nail-snail, tea-team, eat-meat and each-peach
When I was walking down the street I saw a sheep in a stable. It was hiding under a table because it saw a nail on a snail. It was so petrified. The snail was going to eat a bit of meat and have some tea. Five minutes later a team of sheep came into the stable but the moment that the sheep saw the nail on the snail the sheep ran so fast that they lost all their wool .Ten minutes later a dog came running in and ate the nail on the snail and ran away again. After all that the sheep each had a peach to celebrate.
Olivia - P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
owl-howl, our-hour, tea-team, table-stable and cream-scream
One day a little owl had an hour to get to the stable. He had a jar of whipped cream. Then he heard a howl, he looked everywhere under tables, chairs and lamps but he could not see where it was coming from. He looked under one last table but it wasn’t coming from there either. The little owl shouted, “Give me another clue please!”, then he heard a loud scream. He looked under a chair and there he saw a team of foxes drinking cups of tea. That would have been a long day for a little mini owl.
By Olivia C- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
nail –snail, table-stable, cream-scream, eat-seat and owl-howl
One night I went to the stable at my farm. I saw that there was a sheep stuck. It started to scream so I went over to help it. It was not stuck anymore as I had set it free. I went to the table to get it something to eat. I accidently stepped on a snail. My dad shouted me in for whipped cream and strawberries. But on the way home a wolf jumped out and started to howl, then an owl started to chase me and the wolf joined him. When I was running home I broke a nail. Eventually I got home and got a seat.
By Rebecca- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
owl-howl, our-hour, ill-kill, cream-scream and rain-drain
One day I went in a camper van and I brought marshmallows. At night I heard an owl and a howl from a wolf. I ran straight back to my camper van. I heard a lady screaming, I thought someone was going to kill her, I was so worried. My mum was ill, so I went and got some cream to make her feel better. It was pouring with rain and the drain was helping wash the rain away. It was nearly 6 hours later and when we arrived home. I was so happy that I raced up the stairs to play my PS4. I got a new football kit so I put it on and went to play football. I slipped on the grass but I got straight back up and showed off my football skills.
By Shay- P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
fair-fairy, nail-snail, ice-nice, table-stable and ill-bill
One day my mum told me to go in the garden. When I got in I saw a snail so I picked it up. I took it out of my garden and put it in my next door neighbour’s garden. I went back into my garden, I saw a fairy flying about with a nail stuck in her hand, it was not fair. I wanted to be a fairy. I saw bucket of ice so I put my hands in it and started playing with it. When I took my hands out I felt ill, it did not feel nice. I went inside and my mum was paying a bill on the phone. My dinner was ready so I sat down at the table and I felt like I was in a stable.
By Sophie – P4
St Barbara’s Primary School
fair-fairy, nail-snail, ice-nice, table-stable and ill-bill
One day my mum told me to go in the garden. When I got in I saw a snail so I picked it up. I took it out of my garden and put it in my next door neighbour’s garden. I went back into my garden, I saw a fairy flying about with a nail stuck in her hand, it was not fair. I wanted to be a fairy. I saw bucket of ice so I put my hands in it and started playing with it. When I took my hands out I felt ill, it did not feel nice. I went inside and my mum was paying a bill on the phone. My dinner was ready so I sat down at the table and I felt like I was in a stable.
By Sophie – P4